The Editening, Round 1

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So, the new and improved versions of the first batch of stories from my fantasy setting are all done!

www.dropbox.com/s/14amowy5y5z2…

Included in this .zip, in both .docx and .mobi format, are:

-Caravan (merged into one part now, with some heavy rewrites to bring it in line with the rest of the setting and a couple new scenes featuring Ricard, who didn't actually get any dialogue in the original)
-Rhuddem (now with character descriptions and aromantic Melith)
-Valves (now in line with later stories in the setting, and asexual Deiliad)
-The Exchange (only a handful of edits here, plus bisexual Dhalroc)
-Starvation (edits aplenty here-- Gaeth and Heliwr now have much more to say about the journal)
-Chronicle of Stone (the usual small edits, plus a short extra scene)

Let me know if you download these-- as always I'm curious to hear what y'all make of them.

Expect another post eventually, containing links to the updated editions of Apprentice, Psychedelic Warlord, Powers of Two, Spiritskin and Return to Tallowick Bay!
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